Thursday, May 20, 2010

Sample Chapter



SAMPLE CHAPTER

It's 1995 and most high schoolers are worrying about prom , graduation , maybe even socializing with others during the summer , but I'm not . I have to worry about being tormented by some snotty nosed girl . Valerie Jones , my given name at birth , but in school I'm known as Val . I'm a sophomore who worries about a mean , snotty girl named Savanna Santiago , who's in the same grade as me . Savanna is a psycho maniac who almost gave me food poisoning . It all started in our kindergarten play . Savanna was a tree and I was an Ice Princess . She wanted my part because she thought that she was prettier than anybody else and I took it. I didn't do it on purpose . I even said sorry to her for taking her desired part. Isn't sorry good enough ? I mean it was also a sincere apology which came right from the heart . Savanna got Castor oil and White Vinegar and put it in a cup with Capri Sun . She gave it to me before the play started. It had a tangy after taste , but I still drank it . When I was strutting my stuff on stage I started to feel a little light headed. Then I felt some of the left over taco from dinner last night in my throat. Then out it came . Everybody in the audience squealed . I then fainted because of my dizziness . My mom called the ambulance on the double, trying to get a grip of me . They took me away to the hospital and checked my temperature . I was fairly normal , but then started to puke again .It felt like a mini sea bringing violent waves across my stomach. I landed in the doctor's office . The doctor had said " For a few hours you will experience drowsiness , nausea , diarrhea , and vomiting . My mom had told me that the doctor had said that when I got home . But all I heard at the doctor's office was "For a few blah , blah , blah , experience , blah , blah , blah, blah ". All that talking gave me a humongous migraine . I couldn't eat anything nor drink because of my food poisoning . I felt highly dehydrated and I felt the need to eat , badly . My mom had to do a daily check with me to see if anything went wrong .My mom had gave me some pedialyte and told me to drink it slowly. Two days later Savanna had confessed to me and my mom that she put Castor oil and Vinegar in the juice so I wont be able to perform and take my place as the Ice Princess.

For years she has still bothered me and didn't even get the chance to say sorry . I bet she doesn't even remember of what she did in the past and still taunts me . Until she says sorry I will not forgive her and get back at her . Then one day my revenge had took place , but I wasn't the one who committed it . What will happen to Savanna ? Will she even remember the past ? Will she even remember me ?

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